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 ## Building with CMake
 
-CMake is a cross-platform, open-source build system that uses the concept of "build generators"
-to efficiently enable a project to be built on a large number of platforms and a wide variety
-of toolchains.
+CMake is a cross-platform, open-source build system that uses "build generators" enable a project
+to be built on a large number of platforms with a wide variety of toolchains.
 
-Projects benefit because busy contributors don't waste time creating and
-supporting multiple custom build scripts for different platforms and different toolchains.
-Project users benefit because they quickly get a usable build without wasting time trying to
-create build files tailored to the system and toolchain their most productive with. CMake
-enables contributors and users to focus on what they want rather than unnecessary ceremony.
+CMake allows contributors and users to focus on what they _want_ to do rather than unnecessary
+ceremony just to get a working build.
+
+Projects benefit because busy contributors don't waste time creating and maintaining multiple
+custom build scripts for the different platforms and toolchains. Users benefit because they quickly
+get a usable build without wasting time trying to create build files tailored to the system and
+toolchain they're most productive with.
 
 **Prerequisites:**
 * CMake 2.8.8, Bison, and a build toolchain on `PATH`